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I wrote this during the lesson and it is a bit simpler compared to the essays that I usually write but it’s a good essay(probably a band 8)
You can see the brainstorming and some comments in the essay.
Since I came back to Tashkent last Summer, I’ve helped a total of 12 people to get 7+ in writing.
6x - 7.0🔥
5x - 7.5 🔥🔥
1x - 8.0 🔥🔥🔥
Note that I am not saying they got these scores because of ME. All of them were brilliant students and I just helped them a little to unlock their potential :)
The speaking marathon is going well.
We started working with part 2 questions and we will finish them all this week.
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I recently started forcing my students to dedicate a page in their notebook to jot down topic sentences for IELTS writing task 1.
There aren’t many - probably 3-4 for each type. It’s possible to recycle the same topic sentences for almost all graphs.
Some of my favorites include
✅There were considerable variations in X and Y.
✅ X and Y exhibited consistently higher figures.
✅ X, Y and Z showed somewhat similar figures.
✅X town used to be rather empty with only few facilities (maps)
✅Since then, the town has experienced significant changes(maps)
Being able to write topic sentences that appropriately select information is the best way to improve your TA and CC scores in task 1
#gamechanger
SPEAKING MARATHON - DAY 5.
We’ve almost finished part 1 topics(will be done by Day 7)
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Want to earn some sawab this weekend(only men)?👀
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Society would benefit from a ban on all kinds of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can be damaging.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertisements have long been an effective marketing tool. However, in recent years people have started questioning the significance of them, asserting that they are not only useless but harmful too. While this concern can be justifiable, I believe that advertisements still play an important role in informing the public. Therefore, not all advertising should be eliminated.
A key concern regarding many advertisements is that they sometimes promote harmful products. In recent years, it has become common to see advertising for alcohol, tobacco and junk food, which generally contributes to the prevalence and consumption of such products. The advertisements targeted at children are even worse. Artificially sweetened food items and video-games containing violence are some of the pertinent examples for such potentially damaging products.
Deceptive practices of advertisers are another reason why some support the elimination of advertisements. Oftentimes, advertising contains misleading claims and exaggerated product benefits. Weight-loss advertisements are a good case in point, often promising instant results, claiming the effectiveness of the product, when, in fact, this is almost always untrue. Such cases can erode public trust in advertising.
In my opinion, however, as long as advertising is socially responsible and transparent, it should be allowed. Firstly, it is one of the most efficient ways to reach out to the public. Such honest and trustful advertisements often inform customers about the availability, price and utility of a particular product, which in turn can help people save time, compare and make informed purchasing decisions.
On a broader level, a ban on all types of advertising can lead to reduced turnover for companies. As the alternatives to promoting a product as effective as advertising are practically unthinkable, it is natural that many manufacturers, commercial center and even marketers may struggle to find customers. This goes to show that banning all advertisements is not a logical course of action.
In conclusion, some advertisements do have detrimental effects on people but this cannot be a strong enough ground for the prohibition of all advertisements. Instead, only those that can be damaging should be targeted because there are many advertisements that serve the public interest and contribute positively to society.
356 words
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#task2
Band 9
If you offer value, the engagement will increase without you having to ask for it.
P.S: I’m sending this for one prick in the comment section, who said that I increase my engagement by sending the previous posts.
This is the statistics for my speaking sample answers list
Okay, I admit that asking/begging for likes can be a way to increase engagement but most of the channels dont do it for this purpose. Instead, they like to be thanked and praised and feel important. I know you guys won’t admit this, though.
Plus, value that you offer to your followers shouldn’t depend on how many likes you get.
1k likes and I’ll send another band 9 essay. Brand new
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In recent years, there has been a shift away from the traditional gender roles, with men and women increasingly participating in full-time work. It is, therefore, suggested that household chores should be equally distributed between husbands and wives. While this change towards shared responsibility can bring about several issues, I believe a fair distribution of household tasks can contribute to a more balanced and harmonious partnership.
The suggestion that men and women should divide household tasks equally may challenge societal expectations and gender roles. Despite the strides made in terms of bringing gender equality into different facets of our lives, deeply embedded social norms can still influence individuals’ attitude and behavior. These norms can create resistance or conflict when attempting to establish an equal distribution of household chores.
On a more individual level, partners have different approaches and standards when it comes to completing household tasks. One partner may feel that their efforts are undervalued or that the other partner’s work is not up to their expectations. For example, when doing laundry, one partner may focus on getting the laundry done quickly and efficiently, following a basic routine of sorting, washing, and drying, while the other partner takes a more meticulous approach, paying attention to the type of fabric and washing powder and temperature. Overtime, this can lead to disagreements and tension in the relationship.
In my opinion, however, sharing household activities equally brings balance into the relationship. Firstly, when household chores are evenly distributed, both partners share the responsibilities and workload in maintaining the home. This promotes mutual respect and a sense of fairness and equity within the relationship, preventing one partner from being overburdened and overwhelmed.
Apart from this, partners can enjoy the increased quality of life. Once they divide tasks equitably, both of them have more time and energy available for other activities such as hobbies and quality time together. This allows a better work-life balance and more opportunities to engage in shared experiences, strengthening the bond and intimacy within the partnership.
In conclusion, the equal distribution of tasks in the house is a new phenomenon and therefore, challenges societal and gender norms and there is also the problem of partners having to meet each other’s expectations within the relationship. However, this shift helps partners achieve balance and harmony in the relationship as it promotes fairness and it also increases the quality of life.
400+ words
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Someone left these on my car👀
Thank you, IDP IELTS in UZBEKISTAN
This year, to create convenience for the participants, I’m trying to provide answers from different angles, especially to questions that can be answered both ‘yes’ and ‘no’.
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Well, my preference for colors often depends on the context or setting. I find certain colors more appealing in specific environments or under certain lighting conditions. For example, warmer colors like red and oranges feel more inviting and cozy to me, which makes them especially appealing in home interiors. In professional settings, I prefer classic and neutral colors like grey and navy blue as they convey a sense of professionalism
Here's my answer
In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Advantage: offers freedom
Advantage: allows even disabled people to drive
Advantage: safer
Disadvantage: can be face challenges in terms of gaining public trust
Disadvantage: Price
Disadvantage: changes to law enforcement
Good intro: 1) general topic = paraphrase 2) your position
Revolution has gathered pace in the transport sector. It is even predicted that automated cars will replace conventional ones, eliminating the need for drivers. While this development brings about(=cause) a number of challenges, they are outweighed by the benefits.
Gaining public trust is one difficulty that driverless cars need to overcome. The reason for this reluctance to accept such cars is that the technology is still in its infancy while traditional cars have been in use for over a century, which is enough to convince people of their benefits. This means that automated cars may not be embraced universally.
Additionally, driverless cars will entail some changes to the law enforcement. When the computers are full control of the vehicle and there is an accident, deciding who will be responsible for the damages can create a dilemma. So, policy makers should consider these before these cars appear on the roads.
In my opinion, however, the positives associated with the introduction of self-driving cars are more significant. One major benefit has to do with(=related to) the safety. Human error is usually shown to be the reason behind the majority of road accidents, and with automated cars, which are more accurate and rarely break traffic rules, the human factor can be eliminated, increasing safety for both passengers and pedestrians.
Moreover, car owners can enjoy greater autonomy offered by driverless cars. When the system is responsible for operating the vehicle, a person can now engage in other activities such as reading a book, socializing or simply relaxing. These are, however, almost impossible when people themselves drive as they need to be fully focused.
In conclusion, the problems with the driverless cars include initial public mistrust and the changes they bring to law enforcement. Once these challenges are overcome, automated cars are only advantageous as they improve safety and offer freedom.
#task2
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I forgot to post this.
Durdona completed my IELTS 7+ program. She has a very good command of English which reflects on her result too.
An overall 7 with an amazing 7 in writing.
Congratulations, Durdona 🎊 🎈
Today, we’ll have the first meeting with my new PRE-IELTS group!
If you are planning to take the test after about 5 months, you can come to Diyorbek’s IELTS to sign up for my lessons.
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@sanokulovjurabek will this be a video for us, I mean for participants of your speaking marathon 😁
I have been practicing his speech for more than an hour now and my jaws are hurt. By the way, I started recording my shadowing and want to see my results after a month.
Thank you very much teacher. You're the best one and I follow only your channel
I’m thinking of a face-to-face writing course for instructors.
Anyone interested?
There is an 8 year old boy, Kamolov Abdulloh, suffering from leukemia, who desperately needs blood donors. If you are a man who is healthy and 70kg+ and have blood types 1,2,3, you can help this young man to recover.
If you live in Tashkent and are willing to donate blood, you can contact his father Jamshid aka:
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Read this essay, analyze it, highlight the words/phrases, pay attention to the topic sentences, look how I gave my position and developed my arguments, check out how I connected one paragraph to another and just enjoy.
There are sooo many things you can learn, see?
Anyone up for an essay? Or are guys tired? Want some ☕️?
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I’ll send the essay today after 22.00
The essay topic:
Society would benefit from a ban on all kinds of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can be damaging.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This was today’s homework for the writing marathon. At 22.00, the deadline for submitting the homework will be over. So, I’ll be able to send the essay that I wrote yesterday during the lesson for the same topic.
This was a satire.
There seems to be a strange and annoying habit in the IELTS/English community in Uzbeksitan, where teachers/instructors beg for likes.
This is nothing more than a desire for validation or a sense of self-importance.
Imagine giving a presentation and asking for applause before you show the next slide🤡🤡🤡🤡
One of the best essays I’ve ever written. This is a solid band 9.0 essay
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Nowadays , women as well as men work full time. Therefore, women and men should share household tasks equally. (eg cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Jo’rabek Sanokulovning guruhiga qabul boshlandi.
Band 9.0 egasi bilan IELTS imtihoniga tayyorlanishni xohlaysizmi?
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Q: What’s your favorite animal
A: I like lion because it’s the king of the jungle🗿🗿🗿🗿
You shouldn’t answer questions this way. You are not a 2nd grader anymore.
What is your favorite color? - an IELTS part 1 question.
We used to ask this question in kindergarten 🤡