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School should use films, computers, and games instead of books.
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Task 1 - Maps explained
+7 overviews
+7 sentence structures
Paragraph organization
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I’ll write a report during today’s livestream and I’ll explain some of the most important things.
It will probably a map 🗺️
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The bar chart compares the ages when women had their first child in Australia from 1966 to 2006. Overall, there was a growing trend of later parenthood. While there was a sharp drop in the proportion of women who gave birth at the age of 19 and 20-24, an opposite trend was observed among women aged between 30 and over 40s, with the biggest rises seen among women in their 30s. By contrast, after an initial increase in the percentage of women who decided to have a baby in their late 20s, the figure fell in 2006.
In 1966, an overwhelming majority of women leaned towards earlier parenthood with over 60% falling within the 20-24 age bracket. However, this percentage saw a 20-point fall by 1986, further dropping to 30% in 2006. 25-29 was the second most common age for Australian women to give birth in 1966, with little under 40% of them choosing this age to be the most appropriate. After this, despite a considerable rise to over 50% in 1986, the percentage dropped to around 40% in 2006. Similar to women in 20-25 age bracket, those aged under 19 experienced a fall in numbers over the years from an initial 35% to around 21% in 1986 before finishing at a mere 11%.
The remaining age categories, however, experienced consistent rises in their figures. Women in the 30 to 34 and 35 to 39 age groups followed a similar trajectory, with their respective figures standing at 12% and 9% in 1966 and increasing to around 19% and 15% in 1986. After two decades, they maintained their trajectory as the proportion of women giving birth in their early 30s reached a staggering 50% and those from the 35-39 age bracket doubled. Women who gave birth to their firstborns after the age of 40, on the other hand, showed a modest 2% in 1966, a figure, which slowly went up to 4% in 1986, finishing at 5% in 2006.
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A list of the most serious mistakes students make in each criterion Task 1:
1️⃣Task achievement:
Including incorrect detail in the overview
Example: if a category didn’t fluctuate and you say it fluctuated, your Task Achievement score will be 5.
2️⃣Coherence and cohesion:
Not being able to divide information logically into body paragraphs.
Example: if there are 4 categories, you shouldnt randomly pick 2 categories in one paragraph and the other in the next. There must be a logic behind how you select information. Not being able to do this usually limits your CC score to 6.0
To be continued
What other problems do you face in task 1?
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Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession.
Is this a positive or negative development?
As a fellow human being who’s been learning things for some time, I can assure you that you need a genuine emotional connection with what you are learning to learn it most effectively.
Fall in love with what you learn and you’ll learn it in no time.
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A secret that most people dont know:
If you are stuck in 6.5-7.0 in writing even though your English is good, the task 1 is the problem not the task 2.
This is because candidates have more flexibility and freedom to showcase their grammar and vocabulary in task 2.
The task 1, on the other hand, can be more challenging to do so because you need to interpret the data given on the graph. Most of the time, you can’t make things up.
If you analyze my essays, I always use the same approach to almost any topic.
IELTS is a standardized test and so there is nothing wrong with standardizing your approach as well!
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In general, I’m trying to lead a healthier life:)
The bar chart compares people using mobile phones according to age groups in one country from 1998 to 2000. Overall, people from 31-50, and especially those between 16 – 30 were the primary user demographic in all years despite a noticeable fall in the figures. In contrast, there was an increase in the proportion of phone users in the youngest and the oldest age groups.
There were considerable variations in the phone usage patterns among the two youngest age groups. In 1998, only 2% of those aged less than 15 owned mobile phones while 53% of people from the 16-30 age bracket used such devices. This discrepancy, however, narrowed down over the next years, as the figure for the under-15 group rose to 8%, whereas the 16-30 age bracket saw a decline to 45% in 1999. In the final year, there was a marginal one-percentage-point change in both numbers, with the respective figures of people aged under 15 and those from the 16-30 age bracket standing at 9% and 44%
A similar scenario was observed in the remaining two age groups. Mobile phone users comprised 41% of the 31-50 age category, a figure that then dropped by 2-percentage points in each subsequent year, finishing at 37% in 2000. Meanwhile, the figure trended upward for the oldest age group. Starting at just 4% in 1998, it then doubled in 1999 before increasing further to 10% in 2000.
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One of the most common topics in task 1 is ‘age’
Therefore it is important to be able to talk about age groups in various ways as you will have to repeat them several times. What phrases/words can we use to talk about age groups?
These are some of my score breakdowns for task 1:
8888 - change chart(line graph)
7878 - map
9989 - mixed
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1. Writing task hamma turlari tushuntiriladi(change charts, comparatives, mixed, map, process)
2. Hamma tur uchun sentence structures o'rgatiladi.
3. Qanaqa qilib 7+ overview yozish o'rgatiladi
4. Qanaqa qilib body paragraphlar yozish o'rgatiladi.
5. 7+ paragraph yozish uchun strukturalar o'rgatiladi.
6. Har bir tur uchun kamida 2 ta video va handouts bo'ladi.
7. Sentence structures ni takrorlash uchun mashqlar beriladi.
8. Dars o'zingizda qoladi bir umr va undan keyin ham.
9. Bu kursdan keyin boshqa qaytib TASK 1 o'qimasa ham bo'ladi.
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It is common to see celebrities expressing their opinions on matters that are not directly linked with their expertise. While this can help raise awareness of some important issues, I believe this development is a negative one, as their message can be misleading and they may also oversimplify complex issues.
Famous people talking about social matters can help raise awareness of a problem. As they often have a huge following and influence, their message can reach millions, if not billions, of people. This can ensure that a necessary course of action is taken to deal with the problem faster than when a politician talks about the same issue. For example, the deforestation of Amazon rainforests has long been neglected by government bodies until celebrities such as Leonardo Di Caprio – an Oscar winning actor – took interest in the issue. With his influence, he drew public attention to the problem, saving millions of acres of land as a result.
Except such cases, celebrities discussing problems that are not related to their profession is a negative development. One major concern is they may mislead the public. Usually when people idolize a particular celebrity, they tend to believe what they say without ever questioning their credibility. This can even encourage the public to ignore reliable sources, which may prevent them from reaching sensible conclusions. During the COVID-19 pandemic, for instance, many celebrities spoke against vaccines, which somewhat led their followers to reject vaccines even though multiple organizations emphasized the benefits of such preventive measures.
Moreover, when celebrities voice their opinions on matters they do not fully understand, this may lead to the oversimplified portrayal of those issues. As they usually lack in-depth knowledge of the situation, they may contribute to the spread of misinformation and misunderstanding among the public. For example, many celebrities often criticize governments for ignoring some pressing issues such as housing shortages, without recognizing the intricacies involved in finding solutions. Housing shortages are not simply solved by providing houses; numerous factors such as urban planning, infrastructure, and economic policies play crucial roles. Consequently, their followers may fail to grasp the full complexity of the problem, resulting in a limited understanding of the issue at hand.
In conclusion, in some cases, celebrities can help solve problems by informing people on a larger scale than government bodies ever could. However, this does not necessarily mean that they should express their opinions on public issues because this can lead to confusion among the public. Therefore, I believe this is an undesirable change.
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Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Cities these days tend to prioritize offering more housing to people and these developments often come at the expense of farmlands and parks. While this trend brings some positives, it is an undesirable turn of events overall.
The creation of housing opportunities can help meet the growing needs of the public for housing. In recent years, rural-to-urban migration has increased, with many people choosing cities to live in. With this come housing shortages. When there are enough living quarters in the form of apartment blocks and multi-storey buildings not only can people purchase a house of their choice but it can also reduce the rental prices.
Additionally, urban developments often contribute to higher standards of living in an area. This is because the introduction of housing usually accompanies with the creation of a range of public amenities such as schools, hospitals, playgrounds, supermarkets, shopping malls, and entertainment facilities. By contrast, where such developments are not facilitated, people may not have access to most of these opportunities.
In my opinion, however, the disappearance of farmland and, especially, parks in favor of creating houses has two-fold implications. For one, it can have a detrimental effect on people’s mental well-being. The city life has long been associated with the increased levels of stress and anxiety due to the fast-paced nature of life. Having access to green areas usually serves as a counterbalance to this stress and if people are deprived of this opportunity, the life in urban areas may remain even more stressful.
Along with this, a range of other problems may arise from urbanization. As the influx of people to cities in search of better life increases noise and air pollution, traffic congestions and overcrowding may become common. These changes can negatively affect the quality of life for city-dwellers.
In conclusion, the positive effects of expanding living spaces even at the cost of parks and farmlands, include meeting the public demand for housing, coupled with higher living standards. However, I still view this trend negatively because it heightens the stress linked to urban living and brings undesirable consequences for the residents.
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